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Heading into this match, most Barcelona fans—myself included—were burdened by the memory of our failure against Celta Vigo, where we conceded 2 goals in 2 minutes. 


To make matters worse, we lost the match before that, crumbling to Real Sociedad. During that game, we recorded zero shots on target, quite the feat for a team with Raphinha, Olmo, and the record-breaking Lewandowski leading the attack. It was, however, a testament to our reliance on Lamine's brilliance on the right wing and his ability to get out of tight spots and send the ball into the box.


Coming into the game, Barcelona has recorded a 0% win rate without Lamine, losing to Osasuna and Real Sociedad, and drawing against Celta Vigo.


There was a lot riding on this game.


The inclusion of Gerard Martin in the starting eleven further worsened my hopes and I feared we were headed for another draw or even worse, a loss.


90 minutes later, I am elated and overjoyed to write this article. Three goals, three points in the bag, and second (for now) on the Champions League table.


Gerard Martin?


Come to the front. Step out. Congratulations on that game.


Okay. Yes, I know that his performance was not the best. Maybe not up to the standard we associate with the Barca team but he had a solid game. An excellent performance. Incomparable to the disaster that occurred over the weekend.


He lost the ball a couple of times but did not go for any dangerous tackles. He was a stable player at the back.


However, when Balde came on, the attack improved and the left-back was able to assist Lewandowski’s second—and Barca’s third—goal. Not that we are comparing Balde to Martin.


Of course, we give thanks to IƱaki PeƱa for the clean sheet and the offside trap for the disallowed goal. Praise to the magical Pedri and the hardworking Casado for manning the midfield expertly.


All in all, it was a solid performance from the Blaugrana, a form we hope they can replicate over the next few matches.



We are fresh off the international break, and club football is back to grace our screens. Barcelona will face Celta Vigo at the Estadio de Balaidos on the 23rd of November and this match is a must-win for the Blaugrana.


I have 4 major reasons why.


First, the international break. Several Barcelona players left to represent their countries. Pedri, Olmo, Cubarsi, and Casado were called up to the Spanish National Team. This was Casado's first appearance and boy, was it something. 

The midfielder put in an excellent display against Denmark and especially against Switzerland, with the latter earning him the Man of the Match award.

Kounde played for France in their matches against Israel and Italy. Raphinha represented Brazil, scoring an excellent free-kick against Venezuela and helping Brazil draw against Uruguay.

Frenkie de Jong joined the Netherlands squad, playing against Hungary but missing the match against Bosnia and Herzegovina. 

Raphinha scores a free-kick against Venezuela (Photo by FC Barcelona)


All in all, Barcelona players contributed well to their national teams and returned with no injuries. The upcoming match against Celta Vigo will be a great way to carry that form into the rest of the fixtures this month and for the rest of the year.


Secondly, we have to look back at that disappointing game against Real Sociedad. Zero shots on target for the entire 90 minutes. That night, I had just returned from a program and I was very tired but I stayed up to watch the match. I gave up in the 77th minute.

That game gave me—and a lot of fans—flashbacks to the past seasons when watching Barcelona play was as pleasant as sitting on a pin cushion. A resounding win against Celta Vigo will help bolster the team's confidence and our chances of winning the league.

Full-time against Real Sociedad (Photo by FC Barcelona)


The third reason why this match is a must-win for Barcelona is because of the absence of the magical Lamine Yamal. This season, in the league, Barcelona has only lost two matches. The only two matches where Lamine did not start or was not part of the squad list.


In the 4-2 loss against Osasuna, Lamine came off the bench to score one of Barcelona's two goals, proving his importance in Barca's attack. And of course, in the 1-0 loss at Real Sociedad, he was left out of the squad list due to an ankle injury.

While we all acknowledge that Lamine is an integral part of Barca's squad, a firm win at Celta Vigo will show the Barcelona team, the fans, and the rest of the footballing world that the Blaugrana can pull off impressive wins without the 17-year-old.


And of course, we cannot forget our major rivals in the title race. Real Madrid is sitting second on the La Liga table, six points below Barcelona, with a game in hand. They play Leganes on Sunday, a match they are almost certain to win. 

Part of winning a league is winning the games that you are supposed to win, the so-called easy games. The match against Celta should be an easy game and it will serve as further proof that Barcelona is the most in-form team in Europe right now.


What are your predictions for the match?


Character consistency refers to the need for characters to behave in ways that align with their established traits, motivations, and personalities. Consistency is vital for maintaining believability and reader engagement.

How to write consistent characters

Regularly revisit character profiles and refer to them as a guide. Ensure that character decisions, actions, and dialogue remain in harmony with their established traits and development. Consistency is not stagnancy; characters can evolve, but these changes should be justified and presented coherently.

I have a strange example regarding character consistency. J.R Ward has written over 20 books in the Black Dagger Brotherhood series, spanning decades and narrating the stories of numerous characters.

The character in question is Qhuinn, one of the protagonists in the book series. In book 15, one of the later books in the series, Qhuinn and the mother of his child get into an argument. This is a little complex so bear with me.

Qhuinn is a gay vampire warrior and is in love with his best friend, Blay. Before they get together (and as part of the chain of events that leads to them getting together), Qhuinn gets a woman, Layla, pregnant. A lot of things happen but now, in book 15, Layla has delivered the twins. Qhuinn and his now-partner Blay are settling into their roles as fathers.

 

Here’s where things get hairy. 

Layla falls in love. With a vampire who is at odds with Qhuinn and his Brotherhood. A vampire who has tried to kill Qhuinn in the past. A vampire who everyone knows to be very deadly. In fact, when she confesses to meeting him while still pregnant, Qhuinn is horrified, likening the experience to “using a cobra as a scarf.”

Qhuinn continues lashing out at Layla, one scathing insult after another. In another scene, the argument escalates and Qhuinn fires a gun in the same room where his kids are. He even refuses to look at the twin girl because she resembles her mother, denying her attention and care.

This book is quite polarizing in the J.R. Ward fandom. A lot of readers, understandably, were perplexed at Qhuinn’s behaviour. Qhuinn had always been a brash person and very likely to rush into a situation without thinking. But after getting together with Blay and the delivery of the kids, we saw him become a more well-rounded individual, focused on protecting his blossoming family and friends.

So the question on readers’ minds was: Who is this Qhuinn?

This is not a question you want people to ask as they read your book. 

Sudden, unexplained shifts in a character’s personality will undermine your narrative and alienate your readers. I don’t want to go into further detail about the plot and how this issue was resolved as the lesson is clear: create consistent characters. 

Yes, reading is subjective, up to the judgement of the reader. Some readers might disagree with your character, while others might understand and support their actions. However, it is your responsibility to ensure that your characters display consistent behaviours that can be backed up by previous actions or explained by their character arc.

What not to do when writing characters

Inconsistent behaviour will confuse and frustrate readers. If there are sudden, unexplained shifts in a character's personality, this can undermine the narrative's credibility.

Summary

  1. Understand the need to create great characters

  2. Detail the components of a character profile

  3. Study descriptive writing techniques to bring your characters to life

  4. Use symbolism in the physical appearance of your character

  5. Understand personality archetypes

  6. Create balanced, authentic characters

  7. Make sure your characters have backstories

  8. Define character relationships

  9. Understand the motivations and goals of your characters

  10. Write a great character arc.

  11. Create realistic dialogue

  12. Develop a unique character voice


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Yukiya and the Prince begin their journey back. They follow the thread, climbing and crawling through the tunnel. As they make their way back, the bone falls out of Yukiya’s garment and the Prince takes an interest in it.

Yukiya explains his deal with King Saku to the Prince while he examines the bone. Our protagonist thinks these are Yatagarasu bones, or maybe monkey bones, but the Prince seems hesitant to proffer his opinion.

Nazukihiko explains himself. He knew the meeting would fail without him present and sent a letter in advance to King Saku, stating that he would be late and asking the other king to pacify the Underground. As they continue on their path, they realize that the tunnel path has suddenly split into two and the thread they were following has been cut. 

Turns out that they unwittingly crossed the Yamauchi boundary. And now the boundary is preventing them from reentering because it thinks they are outsiders.

While they ponder what to do, the monkeys catch up to them. The Prince tells Yukiya to find a way back to Yamauchi, expressing his confidence in the young boy, while he holds them off. Yukiya manages to figure out King Saku’s hint: the scent of cassia and sandalwood.

They follow the smell and make a narrow escape, leaving the monkeys behind. Outside the tunnel, Yukiya hands the bone fragment to King Saku who seems very calm and unsurprised.

King Saku tells Yukiya that the bones do not belong to any animal that lives in Yamauchi or to the Yatagarasu. Or even to the monkeys.

They belong to humans.

At this point, I was on the figurative edge of my seat. I always thought that the Yatagarasu saw themselves as magical humans; humans with the ability to take raven form. They have human features, talk like humans, eat like humans and so on. So I just thought that they saw themselves as humans with special abilities.

I had no idea that Yatagarasu did not know what humans are.

Indeed, our protagonist promptly asks: “What is a human? Some animal from the outside world?”

Ouch. 

The Prince begins explaining.

“Yamauchi is a little world wrapped in a thin boundary…And the world outside is ruled by humans.”

The mood is sombre and we are taken to a scene where Yukiya studies the Prince’s books which are filled with writings and drawings of human inventions. Motorcycles, planes, and skyscrapers—things the Prince himself must have sketched during his foray into the outside world.

While talking to the team, Nazukihiko elaborates on the situation. He believes that the monkeys have been dwelling in the gap between Yamauchi and the outside world and feasting on humans there. He reasons that a passage in the boundary must have opened up and the monkeys then discovered the Yatagarasu.

While all the evidence points to the passage being in the north, King Saku thinks the passage is actually in the Center. He connects the string of disappearances in the Center to the appearance of the sagecap drug and the monkey attacks.

I have to say, I am impressed. 

Turns out the water peddler, Jihei, is the catalyst of all this.

He procured women for the monkeys in exchange for human bones. The human bones were then sold to the Yatagarasu and compounded to make Sagecap—the drug responsible for the addictions in the Center.

He acted as a facilitator, guiding the monkeys to the North where they could hunt freely without raising too much suspicion. He drugged the sake supplied at the party in Sugou so the Yatagarasu who drank could not resist the monkeys or escape to raise the alarm.

He is a villain. But worst of all, he is a coward. 

At the Prince’s orders, his likeness is pasted all around the kingdom. Jihei catches sight of the posters and goes into hiding. The episode ends with a person hanging dead from a building (presumably Jihei) but not before we get a soft scene between Nazukihiko and Yukiya.

“Yamauchi is on the road to collapse,” Nazukihiko says and I wonder…

Will the Yatagarasu have to integrate into human society?

Surely that’s a question for next season.


My thoughts so far

We are slowly getting to the climax of the story. The loose ends are slowly being weaved together to form one large majestic tapestry. I think the next episode will draw the curtain on Koume’s involvement in this whole issue.

As regards a second season, I haven’t checked if any announcement has been made. I tried getting the novels but I couldn’t find an English translation. I hope the story will be continued. It has received very good reviews and ratings so far.

I still want to see more of the Prince’s abilities. Yes, he has been shown to be proficient with a sword. But I want to see more of this kin’u instinct I keep hearing of.

I want to see his raven form. Is it golden?

Let us know!

What did you think of this episode?


Episode 17 continues with the confrontation between the Prince and the others. They decide that Yukiya will accompany Natsuka to the Underground.

Hamayu is hesitant. She doesn’t think Natsuka—even with his royal parentage—is enough to placate the Underground. 


Natsuka insists. “And I’ll have Yukiya in case of trouble,” he adds. He seems to think that the Underground will be wary of the soldiers under the control of the North, where Yukiya is from, preventing any rash actions on their part.


Once again, our secondborn son is drawn into conflict owing to his birth.


Yes, I understand Natsuka’s reasoning but I still feel uneasy. 


Let the boy breathe.

Our Prince is also dissatisfied but goes along.


Natsuka drives the nail deeper by asking Yukiya if he wants to protect his homeland. Reminding the poor boy that they are doing this for information's sake; information the Underground won’t give up willingly.


Throughout this season, we’ve seen the issue of Yukiya’s parentage brought up in different scenarios and with different results. But this has to be the most…annoying instance.

The boy is thirteen years old for crying out loud. All his life, he has been subjected to ridicule, and undue pressure because he is the grandson of the Lord of the North.


Now, monstrous monkeys are attacking Yamauchi and somehow, the adults—Natsuka, I’m looking at you—are still trying to find a way to use him to their advantage.


Seriously? Let this boy breathe.


As coolheaded as ever, Yukiya agrees, grasping the necessity and urgency of the situation.

Natsuka, Rokon and Yukiya—with their attendant guards—then head to the Underground.

Upon arrival, it’s obvious that this is not going to be an easy meeting. Tobi of the Underground, the person they are here to see, dismisses them instantly.


“We asked for the Prince.”


They aren’t going to take replacements, no matter how royal the substitute is. Natsuka is taken aback. He flounders, trying to explain his brother’s absence and that the agreement was never breached.


Tobi interrupts again. 


“Your oh-so-noble birth and upbringing aren’t worth a bronze piece down here.”


The Lord of the Underground insists that the only thing that matters is trust and that Nazukihiko is breaking that trust with his absence.


The meeting is fracturing. Natsuka offers Yukiya up as a hostage to demonstrate the crown’s sincerity. After all, what could the Underground desire more than a Northern hostage?


Much more, it seems.


The men of the Underground are agitated, insulted by Natsuka’s proposition. They gather their arms and hedge the group in, ready to restrain them.


Yukiya breaks through at the last moment and falls to the floor in supplication. He begs Tobi to reconsider, acknowledging how useless his birth is here in the Underground.


He tells Tobi of the attacks in the North and how dear the victims were to him. 


“So please tell us about the monkeys…I’ll gladly die to keep my home safe.”


His speech seems to be invigorating the crowd present. Not to kindness and empathy but to unease.


When it seems like nothing will come out of the meeting, a man steps out from the shadows.


King Saku. The first king of the underground. 


King Saku, seemingly impressed with Yukiya’s speech, agrees to help him. Oh, and he berates Natsuka for his uppity attitude. 


King Saku clears up the misunderstanding, telling Tobi that the Prince isn’t involved with the “you-know-what” issue. Most likely, referring to the sagecap drug ravaging the Underground.

In response to Yukiya’s impassioned plea, King Saku offers Yukiya a clue. Behind a large rock, in a dark tunnel, there are “white shards” that offer a hint to what plagues the Yatagarasu. Yukiya is told to retrieve one of the shards in exchange for information and is given a lamp that will extinguish in four hours. If he doesn’t return in time, the boulder will be rolled in front of the tunnel, locking him inside.


How delightful.



The clock starts ticking and Yukiya heads deeper into the passage. Of note is the fact that, with the exception of King Saku, no one has come out of the passage alive.


We reach the two-hour mark and Yukiya arrives at a large mound of…skulls and bones.


White shards.


Yukiya picks up one of the bones and is about to return when he sees two kids emerging from another passage behind the mound.


Ravens? No.


Their eyes betray them instantly. These are monkeys.


They chase him, hunting him and as Yukiya struggles against them, he sees figures approaching in the distance. Probably more monkeys.


Thankfully, the Prince arrives just in time. Unsheathing his sword, Nazukihiko lops off the head of one of the kids, allowing Yukiya to retreat to a safe distance.


My thoughts so far

Yukiya is more mature and level-headed than Natsuka. Surprise, surprise.


The firstborn prince was shocked at how he was dismissed in the Underground, floundering when he realised his birthright meant nothing.


It was Yukiya’s humility and impassioned plea that brought him King Saku’s notice and saved the lot of them.


If it isn’t already obvious, I am not happy with Natsuka. While his thought process and actions are well within what we have come to expect from him, it doesn’t make it palatable.


Yukiya’s maturity dazzled me in this episode. Yukiya’s parentage is a touchy subject for him as we have seen in previous episodes. We know how much pain his bloodline brought him and his adoptive family.


We know how disappointed he was when he realised he was selected as Nazukihiko’s aide because of that bloodline. 


Now, we are seeing how he handles that heavy burden, going as far as urging Natsuka to offer him up as a hostage when the meeting started going south.


Without a doubt, Yukiya displays wisdom far beyond his age. I guess that is what happens when your clan sees you as a burden and the world seems set against you. You grow up quick.


There was little of Koume in this episode but I don’t believe that the anime is through with her. After all, we are yet to find out her father’s connection to the attacks and if she is guilty of anything.

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